[kyo_9]

umaaaiiiiii...
I felt very amusing reading your poem..
have you ever heard of " sen no kaze ni natte "?
if i'm not mistaken, it is taken from an english poem
-become a thousand wind-

now it is being performed as a song by an opera-like japanese singer called akikawa masafumi..FYI, this song is very superb coz it has been in oricon chart top 10 for more than a year starting may last year.. cool eh..
it sound a little like this..

watashi no ohaka no mae de
nakanai de kudasai
soko ni watashi wa imasen
nemutte nanka imasen
sen no kaze ni natte
ano ooki na sora wo fuki watteimasu