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Cattieee. - 06-08-2007, 07:04 AM

Aww, that's a really good story. I usually don't like short stories but I read the ending and decided to read the whole thing. The ending was beautiful, but I thought when they confessed to each other was laying it a bit thick.
I don't know, maybe people like that. It's a bit mushy for me. Haha, either way it's great! The ending was wonderful! You only had one spelling mistake too! On a lot of stories, I give up reading because of the atrocious spelling. Anyway it's:

" I looked at him still starring at the twinkling stars above. After a long pause, I answered. "

It's: staring.

You might have accidentally clicked r twice when typing? I find that happens a lot. Anyway, great stoy! Looking forward if you add more.
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