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06-18-2007, 06:14 PM

ok here is the second half.....


A Louisiana Soldier should never go into the woods unarmed....

John was walking alone in the woods that lead to Marian's hut.It takes you an average of a half hour to get there by carrage.Imagine what it would be like on foot.

He tried to escape his mind but he couldn't.He began to hear leaves crunching and branches snapping.
CRUNCH,CRUNCH,CRUNCH,SNAP.He thought he was imagining things so he walked on.He stopped
walking and the crunching continued.CRUNCH,CRUNCH,CRUNCH,SNAP.He realized he was being
followed and started to run.He heard all the stories that night,but he didn't want to believe them,the
stories about the monster that resided in those woods.So he shut them out,or tried to at least.Suddenly
he stopped,he thought he felt the earth move.He looked around for some sign that he was just imagining
things.As he was searching for his "sign" a large dark figure stood tall infront of him.John stood still
watching the creature which was shaded by the trees.John could make out some of it's facial features.
It had piercing yellow-green eyes and razor sharp teeth that looked as if they could chew through steel bars.Before John could get a second glance the monster pounced at him. He leapped out of the way
and ran back towards the way he came,to his town where he was safe.He thought he lost the monster
and instead of running he leaned on a tree to rest.He heard a loud howl and a faint scream,and ran towards Marian's hut.

He arrived at Marian's hut only to find that her candles were out and the door was open.He called her name into the dark but got no answer.He went inside to see if she was hiding or sleeping,but when he opened the door he was speechless.The house was a wreck! There were holes in the walls,broken bits of glass everywhere,furniture broken,and blood all on the bed,walls,everywhere!Everything but Marian.John,frightened and alone, decided to give up and leave.As he was just stepping out of the house
Marian stumbled onto the porch.Her face and gown was covered in blood,she had a gash in her torso from where the creature had slashed at her while she was trying to escape.She looked up at John,and coughed up blood.After a few seconds she was gone.She died in his arms.

John looked up from her face with tears in his eyes,sat her head down,got up,and ran angrily into the woods to find the monster that killed his love.He came upon a fallen tree limb,picked it up,and ran with it in his arms.He planned to use it to kill the monster.

After a long while of searching through the woods he saw the monster.It sensed his presence and turned towards him.John readied his weapon.The monster positioned it's legs as if to leap,and it did.The monster sprang for John but he moved at the last moment.The monster fell but quickly got up and leaped again this time knocking over John and knocking the tree limb out of his hands.The monster fell on top of John
trapping him under it's thick wirey fur.John closed his eyes for he knew he would surely die.The monster looked up at the sky and howled a deep mournful cry and sank it's teeh deep into John's neck.Sealing his eternal fate.

Although John did not die he turned into what he had tried to save his dear Marian from.To this day John still lurks inside the woods of his dear little town.Guarding the woods from any who dare enter.If you are ever lucky enough,when the moon is just right you might hear John crying out into the night.

THE END




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