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07-15-2007, 10:06 PM
I like it. ^__^v
I write lyrics myself and somehow it makes you very critical. But yours I like. I would personally have done some changes, but it's your way of writing and it sure appeals to me.
The 'chorus' parts are missing, aren't they?
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