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07-18-2007, 12:37 AM
Aw, that's kinda pretty. I really like the lines:
"As Far As I Use To See
This World Was Just A Painting
With Gentle Strokes
& Things Colored Brightly"
And just to be really nit-picky for a split second, you made a few typos while posting it.
Anyways, over-all, I really liked it. Very well-done.
Last edited by MelloDramatic : 12-14-2007 at 02:00 AM.
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