08-09-2007, 03:31 AM
story sounds incoomplete, as if it wouldnt make volume one unless more action was put into it, in which cas eyou can make a manga with half of its pages (unedited or edited) all fighting and shooting and erunning and punching and kicking and all that, BUT, story is what some want, action is what others want...the question is which do you want...
"To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven."
-God
good night...
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