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Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Belgium
08-13-2007, 03:41 PM

your drawing is nice , but it probably was a cute girl that you drew from a picture , and now it looks creepy , i know its hard but try to soften some lines and try to catch the right expression for this kind of things.


Remember the feelings, remember the day
My stone heart was breaking
My love ran away
This moment I knew I would be someone else
My love turned around and I fell
Be my bad boy, be my man
Be my week-end lover
But don't be my friend
You can be my bad boy
But understand
That I don't need you in my life again

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