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RxPhantomWolf12... wow, that's some major improvement!!
But here's a small tip- don't use adjectives as often, it gives a bad sound to the story...

Originally Posted by RxPhantomWolf12

Yuna was dressed in a mint green blouse, with an ultra bright, wide white belt with a golden colored buckle, comfortably wrapped around her slender waist. She wore a silver banded wrist watch that she had to turn her wrist over to see the time. She wore a red velvet bow on the back of her head, it was the bow Ryan bought her when they were still kids, Ryan always mentioned it when she wore it. She looked at her watch, it displayed 8:02.

Yuna was dressed in a mint green blouse with a bright white, wide belt, comfortably wrapped around her slender waist, with golden colored buckle on the front, a silver banded wrist watch that she had to turn her wrist over in order to see the time, a red velvet bow on the back of the head, which was given her by Ryan as they were still kids. He always mentioned this beautiful accessory when Yuna was wearing it.
The girl impatiently looked at her watch, it was 8:02 already.

As you can see, there are always many synonyms you can use to indicate the acting person... And also, it is always a good idea to separate description of ones appearance/background from the following action (putting it in a new line, or paragraph), this gives a better perspective of the events in the current scene by not mixing everything up.
I definitely like the way you describe your characters, adding emotion to description of ones appearance and the quantity of details you provide... very nice!