[onexsoul]

WOW U GUYS ARE REALLY GOOD...

*sigh* my poems arent good and i cant make them up well
my friend wote one

here it is


He came into her room that night
wreaking of spririts and wine
He gently shook her awake
she looked up, smiled softly
then she saw it
the spirits dancing in the firey pits of his eyes
He stared at her, greedy demons taking her in
She stared back fearfully, fighting back the building tears
"Not again" she sobbed "Not tonight, please"
She begged, pleaded, and fell silent, crying to herself
He tugged up her night gown and pulled it off
Tossing her around like a rag doll
One hand holding her down, the other tugging at his own waistband
He smiled at her, an evil foreboding smile
A great sob wracked her small fragile frame

He came into her bed that night
With intentions none to pure
He later left her bed that night
Leaving her broken, crimson and tears flowing freely


its interesting
and creepy
i liked how she wrote it tho.... she 17 btw...