I really enjoyed reading it. The first part reminded me of a point in my life. I think that it was really good. One question, this takes place in Japan and in Japanese ( managa/anime based theme) right? If so the part with “I like you, more than a friend" might no make sense in Japanese (I not say it isn't good). Japanese are very picky on there words "like" in Japaneses can also means "love" so they're always nervous to ask some on if they like them. (even as friends) I'm just saying this from a Translators point of view (I'm meticulous as to how I translate
) I wouldn't change anything in English, it was said perfectly (I think)
Over all I really did enjoy reading it, I cried when Haruki died and cried a little bit more when she read the letter from him (So romantic
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