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English Native Speakers, Please Help! - 10-23-2007, 04:01 PM
Could someone correct the following sentence? Any corrections will be appreciated. I'm most unsure about the 'monopolizing the eyes' part. Would an English speaker say that? Thanks in advance!

"I long to be a player like him, who can influence others and who can monopolize the eyes of the fans."
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