oh! Nice poem though I dare say it wasn't very dark. In fact it felt fun and frolicky and awesome! ^_^
Sly-san may I ask you a question? I was quite intrigued by the fact that the poem you posted was mostly prose and when constructed into a straight sentece would still fall within the rules of prosaic grammar. I was curious to know if it was intended that way?
Some styles of poetry actually seek to do that so I was wondering if you subscribe to that... ^_^
Nice going though!