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11-08-2007, 02:39 PM

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Originally Posted by AoshiShinomori View Post
oh! Nice poem though I dare say it wasn't very dark. In fact it felt fun and frolicky and awesome! ^_^

Sly-san may I ask you a question? I was quite intrigued by the fact that the poem you posted was mostly prose and when constructed into a straight sentece would still fall within the rules of prosaic grammar. I was curious to know if it was intended that way? Some styles of poetry actually seek to do that so I was wondering if you subscribe to that... ^_^

Nice going though!
ehehe......oops didn't realize it was frolicky.......I don't remember, I wrote it when I was way younger.....



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