Thread: "Dark Poems"
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onexsoul (Offline)
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11-08-2007, 03:32 PM

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Originally Posted by AoshiShinomori View Post
Good going there onex! First time I've specifically seen a haunting theme on a poetry thread

I'm quite curious though onex-san, do you feel that one word lines accent the poem?
yea... i do.... i mean... i think that is adds more to wat the poet is trying *cant think of the word at the moment*
and wats with the rolling of the eyes!?!?!

do u not like it? wats wrong with it???


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