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Originally Posted by MaymeRachael
What so you think of the opening setting?
America- 1808
It's a dark night...
A beautiful woman named Mary Elizabeth, a wealthy daughter of a French aristocrat, is running in the dead of night from a unseen attacker. The wooded area she is incased in is a very rough terrain, and suddenly she falls upon the damp earth. Franically, she beigns clawing her way through the rocks and dirt until she is satsified at what she has done. From her gown she pulls a dark velvet, drawstring bag and places the object inside the bag into the ground. As she is covering the hole, in the dim light of her old oil lamp the shadow of her attacker becomes visable...
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OOOH,. good timing ^_^ I just finished my screenplay for my scriptwriting class. I'm in the mood to critique =P....Which I would, but I see nothing wrong here (other than the "oh so important" screeplay format...Meh
)...Sounds good ^_^.