[filiadragongurl]

err... I'm not trying to be mean, but if you want someone to language exchange with in Japanese, maybe you should stick to English. It looks like maybe you've learned the Japanese you know purely by speech without trying to write before? If you want some pointers on how to go about writing Japanese like you tried to above (and a valiant effort, by the way!) feel free to PM me. I'm American, but I can still give some pointers.