[musashi]

omg! wow, I really really really like those! they are incredibly great, and i can totally feel what you were writting...I give you a thumbs up for both! Please, feel free to post more!

but here is a happy one from me...

Perfect

The smile that stops me
Dead in my tracks
The kiss that revives me
That brings me back

The embrace that comforts me
The days that I cry
The arms that find me
When I’m lost in his eyes

The words that speak to me
The thoughts so kind
The touch that gives me
A new state of mind

The skin that warms me
Makes me love-sick
The breath that mingles
That tells me he’s perfect


that has to be one of my favorites....tell me what you think...