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12-07-2007, 11:34 AM

Thank you, Shadowulf san

I think that Shadowulf has already correct mistakes that Ronin4hire made, so I wanna try to correct mistakes Shadowulf made.

ummmm....I can't explain how to chose 始める or 始まる.
I think that explanation that Shadowulf gave is reasonable. but, I can't sure...

Anyway, I wanna try to correct something.

これから練習始めます -> これから練習(を)始めます (I think that it is better to put "を(wo)".)

雨が降り始まった -> 雨が降り始めた (renyoukei of the verb + 始める)

I think 日本人の友達と話したんだ is better than 日本の友達と話した in this context.

金 -> (お)金 (The expression 金 includes a kind of rude sounds and it is often used by a thief in plays or books. It is also used in daily life. But, I think お金 is better in this context. But, I think 金 is possible.)

今週、あまり金(が)ない(I think that when someone talks in daily life, が and を are often removed, but when someone writes, it is better to put が or を.)

The sentense 来週が楽しみにだ is not correct, and Shando_san has already corrected it.
来週が楽しみにだ -> 来週が楽しみだ
But, the sentense 来週が楽しみにしている is not correct.

来週、金持ちになるのに楽しみ(にしてる) -> 来週、金持ちになるのを楽しみにしている or 来週、金持ちになるのが楽しみだ。
(__を楽しみにしている。 __が楽しみだ。)
(I think that the sentense "__ 楽しみに して いる。" come from the sentense "____にする。".)
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