[musashi]

Maku.....That was amazing! I really really like that one, too! Thats so full of thought. I really like it. I love reading poems that make me think or feel....that one definatly made me feel. You should know that that is a real compliment. Like when I wrote my story Stars and it made people cry, I felt really great knowing that my work had really touched someone. So, I figured I'd let you know that I felt really touched from what you wrote.....you and Yuri most definately have to keep posting in here...

As for your lovely compliments, Rikku777, I'm very glad you like our work...It really means alot that people read and appriciate it!

and since I'm bored, I think I will finally post Hate's Immortal

Hate's Immortal

I am the immortal
I cannot die
I'll walk this earth forever
I'll do nothing but cry

I've made people fall
I've watched people break
I've seen horrible disasters
I've felt the earth shake

Heaven's gates won't open
Hell won't let me in
I want to cheat my life
Though it is a sin

All humans must die
Their bodies left emty
Like a huge scar
Leaving only a memory

I've been to wars
Darkness takes the sky
And upon the ground
I see people die

I want go away
Die just like them
I want to be a memory
My soul a precious gem

I dislike this world
My life's not worth living
It's all about hate
Peace no one is giving

I've seen it all
More bad than good
Stop all the hate
This world should

I am the immortal
And I want to die
Because this world is full of hate
I do nothing but cry


**This poem inspired by the graphic novel Immortal Rain**