[Hyakushi]

Originally Posted by Sphinx01

Thanks guys I'm glad u liked it...but here I have another poem for u that I hope u'll like as well entitled...

Even in Death

In the end it was my fault, ultimately my price to pay, but
instead u paid for me, now u rest in ur grave, all the work u
put into me, all te time u spent, worthless, like me now...
Why does the fallen live, why do the righteous pay the ultimate price,
Why does fate demand of the innocent their life, why do the givers have
everything ripped from their arms, why does their blood spill instead of ours, why are the sinners forced to live with this Unbearable shit, is this punishment, God's sick way of forcing me to repent...well it worked, but still u lay cold in heavens arms...while my road is another, one of damnation and eternal internal scars, but even in death nothing can devide our hearts

By:Sphinx

I was inspired to write this after wathing Samurai x Trust and Betrayl

Another cool poem but the higlighted parts kind of throw the reader off somewhat ruining the moment. I kind of had to reiterate the part where the innocent give there life ^_^ hahahahaha but then again maybe its just me. I still like it though