[lorelly]

hummm, i was wondering when that text was due... Cause if I had seen the message before I could've help... See my first language is french actually, and I can see some mistakes in the last version you put down. But still I think it is good =)

Anyway, if you (or anyone) have any other text, or sentence or anything to translate to french just ask me! As I said it's my first language (english is second) and I'm really good in grammar and orthography, well everything about writing and speaking french.

Just trying to help out =P

Cya...