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Story Idea-- Feedback Needed - 01-26-2008, 02:38 PM

I got this really good (I think) story idea from a roleplay that I'm currently participating in with one of my friends. The story follows four teenage boys who all go to high school in New York. They're semi-close friends - they go to each other for support - but really, the only thing they have in common is that they're all outcasts that no one else wants to deal with.

And then secrets begin coming out, things that they tried to hide from each other before. One boy is beaten on a regular basis by his father. Another has been raped by a family friend and doesn't know what to do. One is adopted, and feels like an outsider in his family. And one comes from a broken home, and has only his older sister for support, but she's getting married in a few months and moving away.

When they all find out about each other's problems, they come to one conclusion-- they need to run away, together.

The story would basically be about the four of them trying to survive on their own... and of course, there would be some yaoi lovin', I think. I'm looking for feedback and suggestions.



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