WOW! O_O... O_O... O_O... *silence* *faints*
Yurichan I don't know how you do it every time. Awesome poems. I really liked the smile poem. It had such wonderful visual appeal with the sun and the moon both in it! Great goin!
The rain poem seemed to end a little abruptly. It certainly gave a sense of rain with the description of thunder and repetitions of the word "rain", but the ending went with sleep... Was there more to it?
or did that signify the rain and thunder of bad dreams causing intermittent sleep? If so, that's really a deep thought! I'm very amazed O_O