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AoshiShinomori
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02-06-2008, 01:22 PM
I'm kind of curious about the rhyme scheme and meter in the courage poem. They seem to be a bit dispersed. It adds effect to the poem
Do you usually attempt rhyme schemes or do you prefer free verse?
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