Wonderful imagery in the sickly drip poem
. I wasn't a big fan of the uneven syllable meter but the last four lines were really really good! Very evoking poem.
Leap of faith was an interesting read. It starts out with rhyme schemes and even a palpable meter but lets go of those rhymes in between. As a deep thinker and an optimist and more significantly as a big fan of your poetry, I tend to think of that as a pointed effort to show that as the main character made a leap of faith away from their old love so did the poem by moving away from rhyme scheme. It's a very interesting concept
Awesome as always Yuri-chan! Can't wait for more! ^_^ *hugs*