02-14-2008, 12:39 AM
sounds good if you do it right. cant belive no one has replied yet. meanies. i write alot too. too lazy and add to finish anything up really though.
MY OPIONION, BUT IM DUMB:
i like the idea. you would have to space the events out so it's not corny. not too many heart to heart confessions, just let the other characters come to the conclusion.
but dont have them run away. you should have them stand up to thier issues and move out and figure out how to survive on their own. but no stereotypical orgies or anything like that. let the sex mean something ya know? that would set it apart from the rest of the crap alot of people write.
All is One. One is All. There is No Way to Balance Because Balance is the Way. The River Will Flow Regardless of Intervention.
I : Tsunasuke BTW.
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