02-17-2008, 10:06 PM
I don't have the time right now to try to put something together for you, but I do think that if the song were all Japanese the "Hey you" part would be in English, so you might want to keep that the way it is. I also wanted to let you know that it's not going to end up in the exact wording you put there because there isn't a very direct correlation between English and Japanese. The meaning should be there though, which is the important part. Oh, and it also probably won't rhyme unless you're willing to sacrifice some accuracy in translation to find a reasonably close word.
Just thought I should warn you ahead of time so you aren't disappointed when you get something in Japanese.
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