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02-20-2008, 09:03 PM

Ok, collective criticism...I won't pretend to be an expert XD. BUT, I think the hand could use a little work, it seems sort of akward, like the fingers are longer than they should be, and strangely hunched over. Also, a clearer panel layout would be nice. but that aside, it looks great ^_^ keep up the good work!


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