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Originally Posted by Powermad147
My presence on this thread was requested, so here I am (I never turn down requests XD). Hmmm...Looking over these pagfes, they're quite nice...Can't think of too much to critique (other than maybe to center it a bit better...I can't read some of the bubbles that are cut off XD) Hmmm...The only problem i can think of is that the story sounds like I've heard it before, but the artwork is very good (reminds me of Clamp) and so far, aside from being familiar, the intro is grabbing, as in I want to know more. Well...That's all I got >.>
Oh! And btw, now I know why the title page looked familiar as well...It's similar to a scene in the intro of "Hanbun No Tsuki Ga Noboru Sora". Here is a screen of it:
Asleep on the throne...But who's throne is it? This girl in the screenshot is supposed to be in the hospital 0_o |
Oh i c wat u mean...Oh & the bubbles got cut off b/c it wuz da 1st picture i ever scanned...Thank u for ur comments & tips...i wuz kinda thinkin of changin' my drawing style....(again) I change it a lot...When she says she doesnt like 2 b a goddess b/c she feels used its b/c people only care 4 her b/c of her powers...so dey treat her like an unwilling queen(explination 4 why she's tied down on da throne...)