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JF Old Timer
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Posts: 575
Join Date: Sep 2007
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02-27-2008, 01:01 AM
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Originally Posted by Odin
This popped into my head earlier today, its still a little rough, but I hope you like.
Succession
by Odin
I think of then, so long ago,
When I was young, My passions bold.
So it was, you walked those halls,
That place of minds,and lessons told
A chance encounter, under autumn sun.
You smiled to me, and I to you,
Hence began, our journey long.
We smiled some more, our love grew true.
We danced, we laughed, we walked as one.
Thus came the point, my friend turned wife.
Time would pass, good tidings arrived,
You had within, the joy of life.
Seasons turned, history passed,
The child once born, now a man.
A chance encounter, under winter moon.
We smiled upon them as love began.
So it is, we walk these hills,
I hold your hand, and you hold mine.
Our love forever, till time grows still.
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It feels as if the last verse is missing a line...But other than that, it was friggin awesome!!! TT_TT Me is gjealous of your rhyming talent. I cannot rhyme for shit...
For you my love, my heart grows still
...um...um...Excuse me while I take my pill <--- Me, attempting rhyming poetry
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