[InuSan]

Originally Posted by MitcheruOtaku

Here are a couple of mine:

I saw Your Face

I saw your face
again.
Just a glance at
a photo of you,
And my heart
ached,
so hard and fast.
I had to catch my breath
and look away.
Before tears came.
______________________________

I Saw Red



I saw red once,
in a beautiful
sunset.
In an early morning
sunrise.
in the beautiful
Autumn trees.
I saw red once,
in the color of
a beautiful
woman's hair.
She told me
she loved me,
once.
I will always remember
in my heart,
how beautiful.

by Mitcheru Lee

those are good...i love the first one