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04-09-2008, 04:42 AM
well the small panel is ok
i think the big panel in the bottom is the lacking one
you could further divide it
as i can see it there is 3 significant event/action on that panel that you try to squeeze into one
1. corpse chaotic background
2. the biting
3. the facial expressions of the guy bitten
just my opinion feel free to correct me
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