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05-19-2008, 05:03 PM
dont really like sci fi and i think choice of word could be better.
2nd choice im not really sure if its grammar but somethings doesnt feel right.
3rd choice i like the way this one is written and i didnt notice grammar error(short ^^,)
4th cant tell much but i love fantasy
based on the criteria i have to go with either 2/3
and looking forward to idea 4
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