06-11-2008, 12:05 AM
Miyavi-fan,
Machine translations don't work. I get the gist of what you want to say, so in one way, what you have is OK, but you want something that is 100% exact translation, and that just doesn't exist. English and Japanese are too different.
I might be able to fix a sentence or two, but I am not going to rewrite the whole thing. After yesterday, I don't know if Nagoyankee is feeling so generous after you asked for corrections when you weren't going to use the translation anyway.
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