[Befron]

Hello All,

I just found this little writing prompt on the internet for those learning another language. It wasn't for Japanese, so the skills you're supposed to use in writing the paper don't quite translate, but the prompt was to basically just write a couple things about yourself and what you did today. I attached my paper. I write it instead of typed it as I wanted my handwriting to be critiqued to. So if a couple people could not on comment on grammar, but also even if it is correct, would a Japanese person actually speak like this. I also translated so you could tell me if the paper actually says what I wanted to say. (I don't know how that smiley at the end translates though hehe). Ok, so if a couple people could just look this over, that would be great, thanks!!!