[Befron]

Ok, let me see if I understand the mistakes:

1. in watachi there's to much space, while that's one kanji
2. the ya and to in yamoto are too small
3. I shouldn't use san after my own name (How should I introduce my name?)
4. Please tell me what the problem with the age
5. Too much space in the one kanji that represents the su of suki
6. Too much space at the end of line 2
7. There shouldn't be an i there
8. Too much space after that kanji after ima (actually, I forgot what that kanji, I wanted to say now I am writing a letter, but I forgot what that is)
9. Again, too much space after line 3
10. no i there (when so why do these verbs have no "i" I know others do, can someone explain that)
11. I used hoshii in that last line to express the desire I want you to like this. What did I do wrong?

So if someone could answer my questions asked above and tell me if I corrected myself correctly, that would be much appreciated.

Thanks a lot, I really appreciate you guys taking the time to do this.

Would it help my handwriting if my stokes were quicker and less conscious?