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Originally Posted by TheLastFortnight
It's a little hard to read, because you should use a dash (-) or quotes ("") to separate the dialogues. It would help if you divide it in chapters, then you can post it one by one each day.
The name Alice it has something to do with that of Lewis Carrol? So she's fourteen like you and she has vampire friend? When he is hungry what does he eat, is it easy to him to be close with her? Does she is like yourself? Do you think it's more easy to write about someone like yourself, rather than someone completely different? So it's a little auto - biographic?
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okay that is where you are wrong she is almost 15 and i am almost 14 so a year different and i dont play the violin and Lelouch goes hunting four times a weak in his world and i dont see anything that makes Alice and me the same.>^_^<and yeah i kinda copied all of the chapters so i could post it and well that made it knida hard for people to read.