07-05-2008, 12:54 PM
It's a good story, but the material isn't quite up to the standard of 'books.'
You should keep at it though, because someday, you will be REALLY good. But for now, stick to creating fanfictions because they are probably the best practice you can get.
"I'm sorry, but i must have given you the impression that I actually care about your opinions"
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