Its a good start. One piece of advice though, you dont have to be so descriptive about what people are saying. For example:
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"Hey guys!" she said, her voice not very full of enthusiasm, her pale green eyes misty.
"Hey...what's the matter?" Seirra questioned, her hazel eyes noting the hint of red around Marie's eyes.
"Huh? Oh, um, it's nothing...just been rubbing at my eyes, that's all," Marie quickly explained, earning a raise of the eyebrow from her brunette friend.
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I guess it is okay here but for longer dialogues it might actually hamper the flow. Just be sure the reader knows who is saying what and then use descriptions sparsely.