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07-08-2008, 09:52 AM

I think the あ and う definately need improvement. As MMM said, the う looks like ラ and the あ looks quite unnatural. い could do with a slight improvement (make the left stroke curvier) and the お looks pretty okay. Your え looks great, no need for improvement there.


note the curved "cross" and shape of the loop (that kind of resembles の)
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