[Laine]

get rid of the vest! i think it's tacky, man. the pants are nice. add some studded belts, some chains. a black shirt would be better, something tight. and definitely get some heavy boots. make up too, optionally (black eyeliner, black eyeshadow, black mascara possibly)

honestly, i don't know what resources you have, though. are you in a city? usually metropolitan areas have districts of goth, punk, etc clothing shops (for example, new york's st. mark's place) where you can buy all the leather and metal your heart could desire.