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08-11-2008, 08:49 PM

hey this is one of my stories, so please read and tell if you like it. it is called Gaurdian.


The sky grew dark with anticipation,as the air smacked wildly about Alexes face.Brittany was behinde her by a small distance."Brittany!" Alex called behinde her back. "Wich way should we go?"She heard brittany take a long breath " Well, I think a short cut would do"Alex stopped and looked at her friend."Well yeah I mean if we dont, we'd get our asses chewed off!"

"fine,fine.." Alex watched her porslin doll face think hard with her dirty blonde hair blowing smoothly in the shadwoed wind.Then without hesitation her finger flew up in the direction behinde Alex.She turned her head in that direction hoping it wasnt what she thought it was.And in fact it was."No we cant go through an alley"she told brittany sternly.Brittany just shrugged "its the only short-cut we got if we want to make it back on time.".Alex knew she was right .Brittany was always right.It wasn't that she listened to those comercials that said 'dont go walking in strange places alone'.It was never that .it was a secret fear she had deep in her heart.But knowing britt she would end up doing it anyways.Fighting the bad feeling Alex had in the pit of her stomach,she headed toward the dark alley with a jogg,with brittany close behinde.


The alley was like a never-ending black labrenth,that held a matadour for Hurculese to kill.It also reminded her of those black-holes someone accidently stepped into in that twilight zone show that showed every night on sifi.Alex slowed to a stop as she heard harsh french voices.once again her gut proved her right.She moved her hand up and down in the air hoping brittany would stop."see what you got us into."Alex whisperd angrily to her best friend.brittany looked down at the ground "well I didnt know."Alex kneeled down "whatever." she whispered to herself.Alex tried hard to concentrate on what the voices were saying.Her and brittany took french class back in america,they both understood the language perfectly.so it was easy for her to translate the muffled words the men spoke. "WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU LOST MY MONEY?!!"his cold voice felt alive with murder.Alex knew because it had sent a warning chill down her back.Her attention was turned toward stepping sounds behind her.She turned to see brittany jumping up and down softly agianst the smooth sand stones under-foot,her hair flowing with her body.Alex breathed out a reasuring sigh .


At that exact moment a fluffy cat crashed out of the trash cans that had him hidden.Alex stopped breathing and brittany stopped jumping,the cats pelt gave off a silver glow that seemed to light up the alley as his balck paws padded the smooth stone quickly as if he was late for a very important date.She now heard a man speak louder and closer."what was that?" their footsteps coming closer and closer.Alex quickly jumped up."Run." with that they sprinted off into the dark alley to find the safty of the moon.coming out of the alley was quicker then coming in.The swift and sharp turns were shorter then expected but there they were finally running under the moon.The street was silent with only a leaf stirring, and shouts coming from the alley coming closer .

The men were right behind them now,Alex looked behind her and counted the men.thirteen in all.man are we in for it.she thought worridly.Alex knew what they had to do.they were almost out of breath and they probably wouldnt make evan another mile."brittany!" she whispered loud enough for her friend to hear.brittany mouthed the word "what?"Alex motioned for her to go in one of these dark houses.The street was father away from their hotel and still getting farther.She looked behind her and noticed that they were not being pursued anymore,and this street was unfumiliar to her.It was too empty,the place gave her the felling of lonliness.

As they slowed down to a speed walk, Alex noticed Brittany's hand was reached out toward her.she grabbed it and thanked her good friend silently.All the houses lights were off,so they could not knock on any of their doors.She made sure that they walked down the middle of the road,to be on the safe side.she looked up and saw that the sky was clear."beautiful"alex said.All the stars filled the sky like when girls had spilled all their glitter on the floor,and they put a light apon it and oh how it would shine...She looked over at brittany,brittany looked over at her .they walked for a while just looking at each other,both showed fear in their eyes.

The moon was big and bright lighting everything a light hazel blue.Alex was stunned at the beauty that the moon gave them.Triing to keep her eyes forward was very hard for her when all she wanted to do was look up.It was a peacfull silence that made it aukward for her to breath,but holding her friends hand gave her the feeling she was not alone.Then like a warning she heard shuffling feet pound heavy against the bpebbled street.Her and Brittany looked over thier shoulder,nothing was there but leaves blowing gracefully along a twineded path.But the noice of shuffling feet kept coming closer but still they saw nothing.the two girls started to walk faster.

Alex kept triing to look forward but the noitce was too distracting,then there was a glimmer that caught her eye.She looked over and saw the fluffy white cat that got them caught in the first place.She tuuged brittany and they both looked at the cat.he was walking as if he never evan noticed that they were there.So they decided to follow the menacing cat.he stopped and looked over at them,for a minute they just stood their.Alex looked over at the beautiful cat also.Something was nagging at the back of her mind...and then she saw it.Instead of the cat that stood infront of her she saw a handsom boy.he had silverish white fluffly hair that blew softly across his striking face. One of his eyes were a piercing silver and the other was a lightning blue and alex also noticed that he was tall.she stood there paralized by his beauty.He stood with grace,like he was of nobility.his skin was pale that glowed softly in the moonlight.she looked at the corner of his lips wich soon curved into a enchanting mocking smile."do you see that britt?"she whispered gently"did you see that dreamy boy?" Brittany looked at her as if she belonged in the nut house."What?...All I see is a cat staring at us."

Then as if struck by reality it was the cat she saw in the boys standing spot."nothing, it must have been my imagination." what was that ...it was as if that cats a ....human?.As the cat finished looking over them he looked behinde Alex and then he nodded gently .And she remembered that the shuffeling stopped.She looked over her shoulder too...nothing.She looked back at the cat,he was gone.Alex let go of her friends hand and walked to the spot where he had stood.She also knelt down and felt the pebbles.They were smooth and cool,but somthing was there.Like a heat that would never die.her thoughts were cut off by her friends touch to the shoulder,then she saw something.like a glimps of the future,brittany was covered in blood that shimmered in the moon light."Alex"brittany said."we need to find a way out of here."Alex looked at her friends face,and back down at the ground."Thats strange."She stood up.brittany right behind her."what was stange ?"she asked.Alex placed her hands infront of her face to examine them."I saw our future...it was scary i saw you and you were..."alex shook her head in denial " nuthing." TO answere alexes worryies she heard brittany shriek.Alex turned her head towards the noise and there was brittany on the ground.Alex rushed over to her fallen friend."what happened?"


Every shooting star eventually finds its wish

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