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Bureda (Offline)
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08-17-2008, 03:51 AM

Your art is pretty good. Both aspects; writing and images.

One thing I'd like to pick on is your writting is in the past tense, has a gloomy/gray feel to it and is always pointing out something negative.

However!

Your pictures are fairly positive. Even when black and white they still have a positive aura.

If you had a Poem/writing that dealt with the positive aspects of nature you could combine it with your picture of the trees/leaves.

If you had a Poem/writing that dealt with the human impact on nature and how behind every human activity there's life. The can of 'Sprite' indicates human activity, but the soil and the dying leaves are rich on minerals for plants and life!

(Every Art needs a DEEP meaning)

You should adjust your writing to fit your Photography, that way your picture will speak 1000 words and your writing will be the epitome of those words.

Do not think I am trying to be mean or judge you for no reason.

I just think if you combine both in harmony your work would be perfect.

Last edited by Bureda : 08-17-2008 at 03:55 AM.
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