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Originally Posted by Bureda
A CV needs to declare evidence, have positive words, key words and list your skills/experience.
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Bureda is right about this!... However, try not to use "I" as much especially when you can use a listing system..
eg... The paragraphs in the CV have far too many "I"'s... All sentences start with "I" which isn't nice to read.
"
I have attained skills in Child Management through my early work experiences, Customer Service experience during my part time work at Blockbusters.
I worked at Blockbuster for one year and seven months.
I was quick to be trusted and given more responsibilities within the team and store."
Checking back to your CV, it seems you've done the same thing. When you write paragraphs, it's best to avoid repeating the same word toooooooooo many times. I'm sure you know this from your English lessons.