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08-27-2008, 07:16 AM

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Originally Posted by ChisaChi View Post
@SSJup81: Be a bit careful with those - at least one of them looks like it wasn't successful, and though I'll probably be eating my words when I have to write my own, some of them seem really... boring? But even seeing examples that aren't all shining examples is still useful.

I think having a strong, different opening statement is important to set you apart from the rest right away... that's what I always used to do in highschool essays anyway. Damn it's been so long since I've had to write anything like this!
By helpful, it's given me an idea as to what types of things to include and what not, for the most part. Mostly, it's given me more of an idea as to what type of opening I should use. I still don't know what I want to write exactly yet, but it's giving me ideas.

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