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Originally Posted by Nickel
Here is a link to my young adult novel called www. nobody cares. comI'll just post a link to the first chapter.
Chapter One |
It's has an attention getter, I'll give you that much. I enjoyed it a lot. I liked the idea of having a mysterious character on a chat; that's something that appeals to young readers (teens) today. I say keep it up! ^.^ Just don't linger on one thing too long. The last thing you want is for the reader to start jumping lines. LOL