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Originally Posted by DSX
Especially since one is an overall good girl (vegetarian, pacifist, loves animals, etc), and the other is all goth and dark.
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Incredibly cliche lesbian stuff. Not all lesbians are goths/punks/hippies
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Originally Posted by DSX
So the good one moves away for a while, and the goth one really misses her, and that's when she realizes that she's a lesbian (heh, her name is Yuri too, go figure).
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You named her Yuri? *cringe* I sense some problems with a high-school male writing a lesbian story, heh
If they're Japanese, I imagine the reaction to be something like "What, so you think you're special? Quit trying to be unique"
If you want forbidden romance, make them Arab
Good luck with your work!