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10-20-2008, 12:23 PM
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Originally Posted by amuchan
It was more like a story then poem. There were some slices of humor in it though, the way you put things I mean. But besides that, I really did like it. It really does give off a sense of dread and mixed emotions. 5 stars
The cliffhanger at the end though, I thought before I read the ending, I thought it was going to be your soul or something that was dying. Nice cliffhanger
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This is the poem I was reffering to....
http://www.japanforum.com/forum/389448-post94.html
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