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hirashin (Offline)
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Location: Kyoto,Japan
Smile 11-01-2008, 07:53 AM

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Originally Posted by turbobee View Post
"I would like to make friends in Japan to improve my Japanese."

I came up with this on my own, but people have told me it makes no sense at all.

日本になれあうことが私の日本語は上手になります

Can you guys help me out?

Patrick
Hello, Turbobee. I'm Hirashin, 48-year-old Japanese man.

Do you want to make friends with Japanese people to improve your Japanese?

Why are you learning Japanese?

As Nyororin says, you shouldn't say the "to improve my Japanese" part because it sounds as if you want to take advantage of Japanese people to improve your Japanese.

If you send me a private message in Japanese, I'll correct your Japanese for you if you wish. And I'd like you to correct my English if needed.

Hirashin
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