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12-10-2008, 01:45 AM

This is a series of poems that I recently wrote, I also have a few on writerscafe...

Oblivion

Pain and destruction is what she knew

She delved into the darkness

And left the light


As she fell further in

A light searched for her

As tears fell she turned away


He tried to reach her but couldn't

He called to her but darkness held

His light dimmed as she turned away


She went deeper into the darkness

And fell into oblivion

Falling and spinning into it


As she fell she saw his light

She then knew that he will come for her

And save her from oblivion



Lethe

Fallin and spinning in oblivion

She saw his familiar light

But didn't know him


He saw her in the mist of chaos

And felt his light dim further

As he threw himself into oblivion


She grew worried when his light dimmed

And fought against the darkness

To tell him to go back


He fought thru the darkness that held her

While oblivion threatened to take him

He saw her fighting thru the darkness and renewed his fight


She didnt want him to become lost in oblivion

He wanted to bring her back to the light

They met and held each other in a lovers embrace


His light grew strong as he held her

The darkness withdrew from them

But kept its hold on her, and lost her again


He called out to her, using all his strenght

He then thought he'd never see her again

But a small glimmer of light told him he would


Remember

She heard his voice calling to her, she saw his face

Fear, desperation, saddness, something familiar in his eyes

She remembered!


She knew who he was

And felt happy that he didnt give up

But darkness still wanted to keep her


She looked to him, but he was far

And so called out to him

As she did, her light grew brighter


He saw her light grow brighter and brighter

He went to help her

At last he could help her get out of oblivion


He drew closer to her, darkness moved away

She felt herself free, and joined him

Over joyed, he gave her a kiss


She woke to his sunlight kiss

And shook the darkness away

They made their way out


At last they reached light

Tears fell from her eyes

He brushed them away


Into the light they went

He next to her, and her next to him

Loving each other for eternity


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